And she could have never predicted just how much she wants them to. But as the months slip by, bringing her closer to both Hannah and her adorable daughter Abbie, the lines between attorney and client begin to blur. While being hired by Hannah throws her for a loop, winning a divorce case and sticking it to her ex-colleague should be enough of a thrill. After all, though Hannah is probably the most gorgeous woman she's ever seen, she's also straight. When she runs into Hannah Dalton on Christmas Eve, she has no reason to believe her luck will change. Haley Cass When You Least Expect It Kindle Edition by Haley Cass (Author) Format: Kindle Edition 1,194 ratings See all formats and editions Kindle Edition £0.00 This title and over 1 million more are available with Kindle Unlimited £4.31 to buy Audiobook £0.00 Free with your Audible trial Caroline Parker knows three things to be true. And third, Christmas only brings her bad luck-being broken up with not once, not twice, but three times during the holidays is proof enough of that. Second, given how terrible her romantic track record is, falling in love isn't in the cards for her. First, she is going to be Boston's most sought after divorce attorney by thirty-five. Cass can tell a beautiful, heartfelt tale.Caroline Parker knows three things to be true. But even with all the troubles I had with it, When You Least Expect It still gets a pretty high rating because Ms. I know that these things don’t matter to everyone but if they do to you, go into this read fully expecting to be frustrated. But the proofreader in me just can’t get past the issues with the writing so I don’t know that I’ll try another. I really connected with them and loved the story so much. I finished the book last night and haven’t been able to get the characters out of my head. If these things weren’t an issue, Haley Cass would move right up to one of my favorite authors. I switched to the ebook and it was a better experience because I could see the punctuation and figure it out.

I started out with the audio book but I couldn’t figure out what was going on in too many places because the narrator (who did a fine job) had to deal with all the commas and dashes that many passages ended up word salad. I don’t know what was involved but this could have easily been a five star book – and an automatic entry on my “funk reading list” – if it hadn’t been for the insanity that was randomly placed commas, possessives where plurals were intended, and paragraphs so muddled with pronouns that I literally had no idea who was doing what after several rereads. And if a good editor and/or proofreader was used, the author may not have taken the advice offered. Even a good proofreader would have been helpful. I didn’t look to see if there was an editor mentioned but I’d be surprised if one was used. My biggest pet peeves all over the pages. So what was my problem? Grammar, writing style, and misused and overused words. The sexual tension was off the charts and I wanted these two women to have the best HEA ever. I fell in love with Hannah and Abbie and felt for Caroline. The storytelling and chemistry was so damn good. This was an up and down reading experience for me.

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